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The Perfect Submissive

Book One in The Perfect Submissive Trilogy

By Kay Jaybee

The Perfect Submissive
Paperback, 224 pages paperback Online Price:
£9.99
ISBN: 9781908262783
Format: 203mm x 127mm
Imprint: Xcite Books
Published: 21st June 2012

EPUB, 196 pages ebook Online Price:
£0.99
ISBN: 9781908086860
Imprint: Xcite Books
Published: 4th March 2011

Category: BDSM / Fetish, Contemporary, Erotic Novels
Series: The Perfect Submissive Trilogy

Rating: 5 / 5 stars - 5 vote(s).



Hidden behind the Fables Hotel's respectable facade, five specially adapted rooms wait; ready to cater for the kinky requirements of its guests.

When Mrs Peters, the mistress of the hotel's exclusive entertainment facility, meets the new booking clerk, Jess Sanders, she instantly recognises the young woman's potential as a deliciously meek addition to her specialist staff. All it will take is a little education.

Under the tutelage of the dominatrix, Miss Sarah, Jess learns to cope with her unexpected training schedule, the increasingly erotic chill she experiences each time she survives a new level of correction, and a truly sexy exercise routine.

Temporarily distracted from her intimidating rule over Fable's top floor by an enigmatic artist, Mrs Peters begins to plan how she can secure his obedient assistance, in grooming Jess into the perfect submissive...

Laura Peters' mind went into overdrive. Flicking through a variety of possible erotic scenarios, she placed him at the mercy of a large muscular man, begging to be skewered up the arse on his magnificent cock. She saw him bound and gagged; a darkly tanned figure bent over his chest, stroking him relentlessly with a split-tailed whip. Perhaps he was writhing on a four-poster bed, awaiting a woman's eager tongue against his balls; a woman who'd just spent the last hour teasing his body with silk scarves...

Snapping her mind back to reality, the manageress glanced at the wooden-cased grandfather clock that stood behind the hotel bar. It was a couple of minutes to 11.00 p.m. and the poised man at the corner table, who'd sparked her imagination so powerfully, had been watching her for a least half an hour.

Sitting alone on a padded stool, her back resting against the bar, Laura could clearly picture the thoughts running through his mind. Is she an escort or a prostitute? A business woman travelling alone to a conference? Does she have a partner about to join her? She knew it wouldn't occur to him that she was the co-runner of the Fables Country Hotel in which he was staying.

Shaking out the long russet hair that hung down her neck, Laura felt it smother her shoulders. Fixing her bright green eyes on one of the ghastly paintings that adorned the hotel lounge's walls, she hid her smile as the guest continued to observe her. She wondered when he would make a move. He was, or appeared to be, exactly what she was looking for.

Without giving the stranger the satisfaction of seeing her glance at him in return, Laura mentally weighed up his appearance. At approximately 5' 9', he was only an inch taller than her, and she guessed his age to be in the region of 35. His short-sleeved shirt revealed his arms to be muscular without being overworked, and as he sipped at his pint of beer she noticed the signs of a small tattoo peek from beneath his casually smart polo-shirt sleeve, although she was unable to see precisely what it depicted. Reining in her thoughts from too much speculation as to the nature and extent of his body art, Laura continued her silent summary of his physical attributes.

The short brown hair that framed a roughly shaved face was speckled with the first flecks of grey. Almost square in shape, his rugged confident face held deep brown eyes. Those eyes seemed to hold so much promise, and Laura felt a frisson of lust trip down her spine as she wondered what it was going to feel like when he locked them on to her own and begged her to make him come, pleaded with her to... Laura took a deep breath. She was convinced that it would happen, and was already quietly looking forward to seeing how he would cope with what she had in mind.

If you like to read ultra-kinky, smart erotica, then this book's for you.

- Oysters & Chocolate

If you like your erotica dark and dirty, then this is the book for you.

- The Romance Reviews

The Perfect Submissive is a brilliant title. The book is fun and well-written and upholds my personal conviction that there are many good authors out there producing high quality erotic fiction.

- Erotica Readers & Writers Association

The Perfect Submissive is filled with interesting and provocative characters. They are all strong, yet some yearn to be submissive and dominated. Still, other characters do not think they want to be dominated, but are unable to refuse. This book is an exciting story that explores the different suites of the Fable Hotel’s top floor and allows the reader to witness the characters’ activities within them. Their erotic activities pulls the reader in the same way they pulled Jess Sanders in. I wanted to know what happened behind all the doors of the 5th floor, and while I was always surprised by what I found, I was never disappointed.”

- Paula Tufto - Goodreads http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/602220683

 “This book was so HOT it could have spontaneously combusted!” says reviewer Miss Lily Hastings. “The novella brilliantly tells the tale of the Fables Hotel through the minds and story of the main characters, Jess, Mrs Laura Peters and Sam… Mrs Peters, a masterful Dominant introduces Jess to the top floor of the hotel comprising of a series of five rooms each offering a unique BDSM experience including the mysterious Room 54 ~ each with their own dark secrets once the door closes behind the occupants.

If you like your erotica overflowing with kink, fetish with dark and satisfying sprinkles which leave you squirming in your seat then you won’t be disappointed!”

- Lily Hastings - Goodreads http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/599110004

I have read a few BDSM novels and they are always either very hardcore, yet
soulless and shallow; or have depth, but no real kink. This is the best of both,
the scenes are racy and inventive and the story interesting without being
ridiculous.

I think the author is clearly very smart, very creative and
lots of fun to read. I will be keeping an eye out for her other books!

- S Phillips Amazon review


 Her "Perfect Submissive Trilogy," from Xcite Books, is a shining example of to-the-point lustful prose, penned in an unshakable style, and hitting all the marks expected from a well respected author. Reading her work leaves no doubt she is in control - both in her craft and in her knowledge of what readers want when it comes to sexy BDSM material.

- Patrick Whitehurst http://patrickwhitehurst.blogspot.co.uk/2013/07/review-perfect-submissive-trilogy.html

Sexy read!!!

    I am often hesitant buying this genre without reviews as there is far too much cheese however I liked the description so decided to give this a go.  Fair price too, just inside my £3 nothing to lose rule.  The perfect Submissive has you hooked from the first few pages and doesn't let go.  I would very much like to visit this hotel and get to know a few of the employees.  Kay has written with just enough detail to guide your imagination without overdoing it and filling the pages with c's f's and other words which when overused, lose their power.  The fact she hasn't overdone it leaves plenty for your individual fantasies to form the pictures for you.  She doesn't take that away from you. All in all, a must buy.

- Andy Lane https://itunes.apple.com/gb/book/the-perfect-submissive/id544244421?mt=11&ign-mpt=uo%3D4

Jess thought she had got herself a normal clerk job at an exclusive hotel little did she know how wrong she was. Her boss Mrs Peters and the sexy Miss Sarah strict full time dommes run the 5th floor the sexy secret addition to this hotel; each of the five rooms are all designed for influential clients and their sexual needs.
Mrs Peters immediately sees something special in Jess and plans a series of  sexual trials to see if she is suitable to be the latest new employee of the 5th Floor.We follow Jess on her training regime for a job she knows nothing about; would she even want this new future career? But either way Jess's life is going to change forever as she discovers her new Clerk job isn't what it seems.

Between Mrs Peters and Miss Sarah they don't miss a moment to help test Jess's skills each trial bringing her to new levels and sexual experiences beyond her imagination. Jess learns that its not all about sex its about taking the mind to new levels. Each test carefully watched and assessed by the intimidating Mrs Peters (One scary lady) to see how she copes and how much she can endure...and...or...enjoy.

 

I found Jess completely relatable she could be any one of us or even you, I felt Jess's confusion, fear and annoyance at not quite believing what is going on around her, but turned on enough to stay and not run out the door. We feel her shock to her own sexual needs that she seems to be now craving thanks to the trials. 

Its a fast paced read and I loved that its so different as Kay maintains a wonderful level of sexual tension throughout the whole book keeping you on your seat to what is going to happen next.

 

These trials are not for the vanilla readers out there as its full on BDSM, spanking, humiliation, flogging, girl on girl and group sex. We gradually get to see inside each of the 5 specialised rooms and I loved that Kay left room 5 till the very end; leading to the exciting super sexy climax that I certainly wont be giving away; you have to read this to see and no you wont guess what's behind door 54 but I want that room lol.
I have read a few of Kay's short stories and enjoyed those too but this full length novel has to be my favourite so far, I was disappointed it was over and wanted more. So if you like your sex with more imaginative kink this is the book for you.

- Midnite Boudoir

Kay Jaybee’s stories have appeared in many anthologies published by Xcite Books, Cleis Press, Black Lace, Mammoth Books, Penguin, Seal, Sweetmeats Press, and Forum and Foreplay Magazines. She has written e-novels for OC Press, Austin & Macauley and Xcite Books and is a regular contributor to www.OystersandChocolate.com

 

Customer Reviews:

Reviewed by: S Phillips on 2nd October 2013 3:07PM

I have read a few BDSM novels and they are always either very hardcore, yet soulless and shallow; or have depth, but no real kink. This is the best of both, the scenes are racy and inventive and the story interesting without being ridiculous.

I think the author is clearly very smart, very creative and lots of fun to read. I will be keeping an eye out for her other books!


Reviewed by: HappilyExperimenting on 2nd October 2012 5:21PM

The first chapter: Immediately you know this is going to be a thrilling story, with heaps of sinful desires and kinky sex scenes. Jess has landed a new job as a clerk at Fables Hotel and Mrs Peters, the "entertainment manager" sees promise in the young girl's behaviour and attitude. She feels that Jess could become the perfect submissive, if only she would let herself!

Jess (or "Miss Saunders" when she is disobedient) is taken under the wing of a Miss Sarah, who guides her through the five rooms where secret activities take place, activities that Jess agonisingly wants to partake in. Unfortunately reality gets in the way a lot of the time for Jess and her head almost always rules over her heart - in the beginning.

Without giving too much away I can say this is a very erotic book, with girl-on-girl activity, the use of Kegal balls, dildos, restraints, blindfolds, canes, the lot. Definitely not for the faint-hearted and more heart-pumping than watching erotic movies, this book embraces the very essence of bondage (unlike a terrible book I could moan about for fifty hours) and guides us and Jess through her journey of submission.

10/10 for sexiness, 10/10 for plot, this page-turning book will give every dominatrix and submissive something to smile about!


Reviewed by: Midnight Boudoir on 19th July 2012 3:59PM

I was really looking forward to reading another of Kay Jaybee's books after reading some of her naughty short stories.
This is her latest full length novel so I knew I was in for a brilliant steamy read and being a born submissive I was also looking forward to reading this.

Jess thought she had got herself a normal clerk job at an exclusive hotel little did she know how wrong she was. Her boss Mrs Peters and the sexy Miss Sarah strict full time dommes run the 5th floor the sexy secret addition to this hotel; each of the five rooms are all designed for influential clients and their sexual needs.
Mrs Peters immediately sees something special in Jess and plans a series of sexual trials to see if she is suitable to be the latest new employee of the 5th Floor.We follow Jess on her training regime for a job she knows nothing about; would she even want this new future career? But either way Jess's life is going to change forever as she discovers her new Clerk job isn't what it seems.
Between Mrs Peters and Miss Sarah they don't miss a moment to help test Jess's skills each trial bringing her to new levels and sexual experiences beyond her imagination. Jess learns that its not all about sex its about taking the mind to new levels. Each test carefully watched and assessed by the intimidating Mrs Peters (One scary lady) to see how she copes and how much she can endure...and...or...enjoy.

I found Jess completely relatable she could be any one of us or even you, I felt Jess's confusion, fear and annoyance at not quite believing what is going on around her, but turned on enough to stay and not run out the door. We feel her shock to her own sexual needs that she seems to be now craving thanks to the trials.
Its a fast paced read and I loved that its so different as Kay maintains a wonderful level of sexual tension throughout the whole book keeping you on your seat to what is going to happen next.

These trials are not for the vanilla readers out there as its full on BDSM, spanking, humiliation, flogging, girl on girl and group sex. We gradually get to see inside each of the 5 specialised rooms and I loved that Kay left room 5 till the very end; leading to the exciting super sexy climax that I certainly wont be giving away; you have to read this to see and no you wont guess what's behind door 54 but I want that room lol.
I have read a few of Kay's short stories and enjoyed those too but this full length novel has to be my favourite so far, I was disappointed it was over and wanted more. So if you like your sex with more imaginative kink this is the book for you.


Reviewed by: Lesley on 15th August 2012 8:41AM

What a book and what a ride, beautifully wriiten and greatly explained leaves nothing to the imagination. A real erotic book that leaves you begging for more.


Reviewed by: Matt Richards on 10th April 2012 3:27PM

This is the first novel I have read by Kay Jaybee but this will not be my last. I thoroughly enjoyed this! It is kinky and she has created fantasy hotel that I wished existed for I am sure I would have been as disappointed to book out as I was when the story ended - I just wanted the story to continue! Just how do I become a perfect Submissive? Go through the tortuous trails that come out of Jaybee\'s wonderful mind.

I have one Author\'s work who I follow and read - now I think I have just found another author. Looking forward to reading her next collection.



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